Rate poem . Dark ambitions of life?

its beautiful. Probably the closest emotion I can ociate is confusion and sadness. I see how you burden yourself with your words and the way you express yourself becomes more of an open door, like your trying to get the message across but just don't know how and why. It's a collaboration of many thoughts indeed and you suppressed them in one poem and it is lovely to read as it is, but tragic to see that the feelings are restrained and somehow limited to space and quality of work. Good job! Keep it up